I don’t necessarily believe in Darwinian evolution, but the imagery works:Imagine the first fish to grow legs and walk up onto the earth. It’s safe, because there’s nothing else there yet to eat it or anything. But it’s also trembling, not in fear, but because it’s legs are new. Strong, but unstable at first. “We are so new, floundering”Your love is so strong, (as is your poetic talent) but shaky until it has been stood on for a while.Keep standing. And please oh please keep writing!!!
gazaneo 
xo
AAAAAA… I can’t believe you posted it!!! For the record, this is one of the best poems I’ve ever read, my love.
I totally identify with that. Amazing poem.
beautiful…
I don’t necessarily believe in Darwinian evolution, but the imagery works:Imagine the first fish to grow legs and walk up onto the earth. It’s safe, because there’s nothing else there yet to eat it or anything. But it’s also trembling, not in fear, but because it’s legs are new. Strong, but unstable at first. “We are so new, floundering”Your love is so strong, (as is your poetic talent) but shaky until it has been stood on for a while.Keep standing. And please oh please keep writing!!!
Love it.We’re approaching 3 years. Some days we feel like old wizened lovers. Most days… we still feel like that 🙂