6 thoughts on “touché

  1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Did you write that yourself? That’s pretty good. Although I always considered Andrew’s wits closer to a dull spoon than a sword…

  2. Unknown's avatar Andrew G says:

    Beautiful sonnet, my love. I like the volta: it’s more of a pause then a turn to a new though… almost a deep breath waiting for the plunge. Yummy words.

  3. Unknown's avatar Sarah-Aubrey says:

    Thanks, Anonymous.However, I’m pretty sure the compliment was canceled out by the stab to my boyfriend’s wit.

  4. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    A stab to the wits. That has to hurt.

  5. Unknown's avatar Kate says:

    Anon is mean. Sarah that should be included in Moss Green.

  6. Unknown's avatar nikolas says:

    I’m impressed. We searched for it on Google to find out who wrote it… only to discover that you did. And I cut my finger on a spoon once.

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